Question

10．你即將離開學(xué)習(xí)和生活了三年的母校，新的生活即將開始，現(xiàn)在以Betty的身份為你最好的朋友Kendy寫一段畢業(yè)留言，包括下列要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右．
Happy time：play basketball，go to the park …．

1  他給你留下深刻的印象．
2．你們?cè)谝黄鸬亩冗^的快樂時(shí)光及她對(duì)你的幫助．
3．對(duì)他美好的祝愿．
Impression：tall，outgoing，active…．
4．…
Best wishes：healthy，successful
…
My leaver's party speech
Dear Kendy，
Our life in the middle school will come to an end soon．I'll never forget you．You are a tall，active and outgoing boy．There's always a smile on your face and everybody likes to make friends with you．We used to play basketball on the playground．Sometimes we went to the park and had a good time there．You often helped me with my English．At this very moment I'm saying goodbye to you，I just want to give you my best wishes：
　　I hope you are happy and healthy forever．
　　I hope you are successful in the future．
Yours
Betty．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是以Betty的身份給同班同學(xué)Kendy寫一段畢業(yè)留言，內(nèi)容包括他給你留下的深刻印象、你們?cè)谝黄鸬目鞓窌r(shí)光以及對(duì)他（她）最美好的祝愿．
時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
描述圖畫；印象：個(gè)子高，開朗，活躍，一起打籃球去公園，祝愿健康和快樂
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
make friends 交朋友
used to do sth 過去常常做某事
have a good time 玩的開心
help sb with sth 幫助某人做某事
【高分句型】
1，．①There's always a smile on your face and everybody likes to②make friends with you．
①there be表示有，表示存在．
②make friends with sb  與某人交朋友
2．①At this very moment I'm saying goodbye to you，I just ②want to give you my best wishes．
①At this very moment在此時(shí)此刻
②want to do sth 想要做某事
3．I hope you are happy and healthy forever．
hope后是省略了that的賓語從句

解答 Dear Kendy，
Our life in the middle school will come to an end soon．I'll never forget you．You are a tall，active and  outgoing boy．There's always a smile on your face and everybody likes to make friends with you．【高分句型】（印象）We used to play basketball on the playground．Sometimes we went to the park and had a good time there．You often helped me with my English．（快樂時(shí)光）At this very moment I'm saying goodbye to you，I just want to give you my best wishes：【高分句型】
　　I hope you are happy and healthy forever．【高分句型】
　　I hope you are successful in the future．（祝愿）
Yours 
Betty

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇命題作文，寫一段畢業(yè)留言．動(dòng)筆前先確定書寫內(nèi)容，可以先簡(jiǎn)單描述這紀(jì)念相處的情況，然手再表達(dá)一下自己的感想，祝福等．由于是抒情性短文，故用將來時(shí)態(tài)較多，注意時(shí)態(tài)和時(shí)間狀語的搭配．寫作中選取自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)同寫，主要不要犯語法書寫的低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤．
這類作文的說些說難也容易，難在沒有給出具體材料，需要自己組織材料，易在可以選取自己熟悉的內(nèi)容寫．不跑題不偏題是寫好此類作文的關(guān)鍵，動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀題目，要求然后在動(dòng)筆．