Question

9．假如你是Han Mei，下面是一封你的筆友Alice 給你發(fā)來的e-mail，請你根據(jù)e-mail 的內(nèi)容給她寫一封回信，與她交流看法，并幫她排憂解難．
提示詞語：listen to，mother's love，care about，communicate with，
寫作要求：1．語句通順，書寫工整；
2．可用所給提示詞語，也可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3．詞數(shù)在60-80左右

Dear Han Mei，
I'm afraid I've got a big problem recently．My mother talks too much to me．She always tells me，"Be careful while crossing the street．""Put on more clothes．""Did you do a good job at school？"and so on．I'm annoyed（煩惱）．What shall I do？
Alice

Dear Alice，
As a teenager，I met the same problem as you．But now I can get along better with my mother．Here are some ideas for you．
Your mother talks much，because she cares aboutyou．Maybe it's not a good way，but it shows your mother's love．So I think you should listen toher．If your opinions are different from your mother's，you can communicate withher，and tell her what you are thinking about．
If your mother doesn't take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile．
I hope what I say here can help you a lot．
Yours，
Han Mei．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：Your mother talks much，because she cares about you你媽媽說話多，因為她在乎你．這是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句；care about在意．
高分句型二：If your mother doesn't take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile如果你的媽媽不接受你的建議，保持沉默，給她一個微笑．這是由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句．

解答 Dear Alice，
As a teenager，I met the same problem as you．But now I can get along better with my mother．Here are some ideas for you．（開篇點題）
Your mother talks much，because she cares about you．（高分句型一）Maybe it's not a good way，but it shows your mother's love．So I think you should listen to her．If your opinions are different from your mother's，you can communicate with her，and tell her what you are thinking about．If your mother doesn't take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile．（高分句型二）（解決方法）
I hope what I say here can help you a lot．（表達期望）
Yours，
Han Mei

點評 （1）句型多樣化，不要I（We）…到底，使人覺得乏味．（2）適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句．（3）進一步描繪人或事物時，適當(dāng)使用定語從句．（4）適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動詞．（5）偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感．