Question

【題目】書面表達

假設你名叫張華，是“2018無錫馬拉松”組委會的一名工作人員。近日，外聯(lián)絡部轉發(fā)給你一位牙買加選手的電子郵件，并附上了組委會的處理意見。請根據郵件內容及處理意見給他回復。

Dear sir/madam,

I'm Alfred from Jamaica. I took part in 2018 Wuxi Marathon on March 25 and I got a silver medal. I didn't realize you had got my name wrong until I showed the medal to my friends. My family name is Morrison, with double 'r'. However, there's only one 'r' on the medal. How could this happen?! :-(

Yours sincerely,

Alfred MoRRison

處理意見：

1.重制獎牌，6月25日前寄出；

2.提供一張免費機票作為補償(compensation),兩年內可從世界任意地點飛往上海；

3. 舊獎牌須收回。

注意事項：

1.郵件內容須根據處理意見自擬，要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合情境；

2.詞數在80個左右，郵件的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數；

3. 郵件必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Morrison:

It is true that we have got your name wrong. I am sorry for making such a mistake.

We have decided to have made a new model for you after discussing it. It will be sent to you before June 25th. Meanwhile, we will offer you a free air ticket as compensation. You can fly to Shanghai from anywhere over the world within two years. But the old model must be taken back. If you have anything else, please contact with us anytime.

Thank you for supporting our work and wish you a good trip!

Yours sincerely,

Zhang Hua

【解析】這是一篇材料作文，以“2018無錫馬拉松”組委會工作人員張華的名義給牙買加選手回復一封電子郵件，注意書信的格式。首先要認真閱讀所提供的電子郵件，掌握其書信內容：來自牙買加的艾爾弗雷德在2018年無錫馬拉松比賽獲得了銀牌，但獎牌上的名字“Morrison”漏寫一個“r”，質疑組委會怎么會出現這種情況。在寫作中要結合組委會的處理意見予以回復。首先要對所犯的錯誤表示道歉，然后結合三點處理意見逐一回復，最后要感謝對方對工作的支持并祝旅行愉快。在寫作中，要注意有兩處用到被動語態(tài)來表達：獎牌于6月25日前寄出（一般將來時的被動語態(tài)），舊獎牌須收回（含有情態(tài)動詞的被動語態(tài)）。