Question

5．生活中，一定會有很多讓你難忘的人或事．請你用英語記錄最讓你感動的人或事，以"A person I will never forget"為題，寫一篇英語短文．
要求如下：1．短文內容應包括人物的外貌、性格、愛好和使你難忘之處等；
2．短文中不得出現真實的校名和人名.3．詞數80左右．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇命題作文，寫作時，要確定好所寫的人或事，列出要點．注意人稱和時態(tài)，以第一人稱和第三人稱來描述，時態(tài)以現在時態(tài)為主．
重點短語和句型：play with sb 和某人一起玩
make sth+形容詞，讓…怎么樣
be strict with sb對某人要求嚴格
allow sb to do sth讓某人做某事
The person I'll never forget is my English teacher．
句中I'll never forget作person的定語，是一個限制性定語從句．
He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don't know．
句中what連接賓語從句，作know的賓語．

解答 A person I will never forget
The person I'll never forget is my English teacher．【高分句型】He's a tall man with thick glasses．He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us．He's humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting．He's kind but is strict with us．【外貌、性格、愛好】He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don't know．【高分句型】He often tells us that it's no use memorizing new words without．My English has greatly improved with his help．【難忘之處】

點評 考生需根據所提供的信息提煉文章的寫作主題，需了解寫作要點及寫作意圖，仔細構思寫作結構，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．