Question

12．友誼是幸福 源泉之一，請你寫一篇短文，要點(diǎn)如下：
1．?dāng)⑹鲆患�你和好朋友之間發(fā)生的事情；
2．表明這件事情中你在他（她）身上學(xué)習(xí)到的品質(zhì)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)80詞左右；
2．不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名，校名等相關(guān)信息．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I was so shy that I was afraid to tell the truth．我很害羞，不敢說實(shí)話．
這是so…that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句，如此…以致于…；be afraid to do sth害怕做某事
高分句型二：
If you are honest，your friend can trust you．如果你誠實(shí)，你的朋友會信任你．
這是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，從句一般用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

解答 Mary and I are best friends．We always go to school together and share everything with each other．One day，we were reading a new magazine at the school library．But I broke the magazine．I was so shy that I was afraid to tell the truth．【高分句型一】Mary took the magazine and told the teacher that she broke the book and said sorry．[敘述一件和好朋友之間發(fā)生的事]
Friends should be honest．If you are honest，your friend can trust you．【高分句型二】My best friends always tell me when I do something wrong．It hurts sometimes，but it makes me a better person，too．[在朋友身上學(xué)到的品質(zhì)]

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