Question

請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇作文，描寫(xiě)你的家鄉(xiāng)近幾年來(lái)的變化。從馬路、交通、建筑物、商店、旅游、人口、居住條件等方面進(jìn)行描述。（不少于80詞）
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Answer 1

I was born in a poor and small village with pure water and green mountains.People there are friendly.They used to rode their bike or just walked to town.Great changes have taken place in recent years.People live in an apartment.Shops can be seen everywhere.Roads are getting wider and wider.They go to town by bus and taxi.More and more visitors come here to spend their holidays.However,the air is not as flesh as before,and the trees are getting fewer and fewer.Now,they all realize that protect the environment is very important.

試題分析：這是一篇話(huà)題作文，題材貼近學(xué)生生活，學(xué)生有話(huà)可說(shuō)。所給材料比較簡(jiǎn)潔，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把涵蓋的內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。因此，動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，羅列要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文主要取材于學(xué)生身邊發(fā)生的事。在行文過(guò)程中，多用簡(jiǎn)單句，同時(shí)使用一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，如: pure water and green mountains、 Great changes have taken place、 more and more 、as ---as等，這為文章增色不少。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。