Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

請根據(jù)下面的表格的提示，寫一篇題為：“Saving the Earth”的英語短文。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右。 2.標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

3.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)見表格。

人類的不明智之舉	亂伐樹木 亂扔垃圾 不加處理排放廢物
導(dǎo)致的問題	1、土地沙化 2、河水變臟 3、空氣質(zhì)量差 4、全球氣溫升高
建議	合理化建議至少三條

Answer 1

【答案】

Saving the Earth

As time goes by, people are making the earth sick. People cut down too many trees and leave rubbish everywhere. Factories let out their waste without doing anything to it. This has caused some serious problems. For example, the land is sandy; the river is dirty; the air is less clean; even the temperature of the earth is rising, and she is shouting for help. What shall we do to save her? My suggestion is that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories pouring waste into the air or rivers. We have only one earth, we should do everything to protect it, or we will regret.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們以Saving the Earth 為題寫一篇作文。短文主要有三部分內(nèi)容，第一部分是人類對環(huán)境的破壞，即表格中的第一部分；第二部分是由于人類的破壞而導(dǎo)致的問題；第三部分是你自己提出的建議。故這篇作文的結(jié)構(gòu)還是很明顯的，寫作時(shí)只需按照這三部分內(nèi)容，用正確的英語將其表達(dá)出來即可。關(guān)于環(huán)保的話題，在教材中也出現(xiàn)過，所以學(xué)生們這方面的詞匯和句型的積累還是有的。寫作時(shí)要注意語句和段落之間的銜接，使表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，在這篇短文中作者根據(jù)題目中的要求， 首先寫了人們對環(huán)境的破壞，使用了這樣一句話As time goes by, people are making the earth sick，人類讓地球生病了，非常生動。接著作者寫了這樣做帶來的問題，F(xiàn)or example, the land is sandy; the river is dirty; the air is less clean; even the temperature of the earth is rising, and she is shouting for help.，同樣用生動的語言，擬人的手法來描寫的。最后給出了自己的建議，My suggestion is that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories pouring waste into the air or rivers. We have only one earth, we should do everything to protect it, or we will regret.運(yùn)用句式準(zhǔn)確無誤。