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11．初中階段的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束．假設(shè)你是張華，身在中考考場(chǎng)，回想自己在父母和師長(zhǎng)的關(guān)愛(ài)和幫助下的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程，心中充滿感戴之情．請(qǐng)根據(jù)表中所列信息，用英語(yǔ)給父母或老師寫(xiě)一封70詞左右的短信，表示謝意．

感謝對(duì)象	Father	Mother	Miss Gao
參考詞匯	take care of，love，help，encourage，cheer up…
	thankful，work hard，try to do better…

注意：1．感謝對(duì)象可在父母或老師中任選其一，但請(qǐng)避用真實(shí)姓名和校名．
2．除表格所列關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)外，還可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮、舉例并抒發(fā)感受．
3．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出．
DearMum/Dad/Mum and Dad，
  Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you…You've taken good care of me in the past three years．When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me up．Once I argued with my classmates and I didn't know how to deal with it．You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others．With your help，I've become a popular boy and made a lot of friends．I'm so thankful to you for your love and care that I'll work harder and try to do better in the future．
Best wishes!
                                                    Yours
                                                         Zhang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是父母或老師寫(xiě)一封信，表示謝意．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、二人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．感謝的對(duì)象；
2．感謝原因；
3．舉例說(shuō)明
4．感受和打算．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
take care of照顧
in trouble 處于困境
argue with sb 與某人爭(zhēng)吵
cheer up 使振奮起來(lái)
used to do sth 過(guò)去常常做某事
get along with sb 與某人相處
try to do sth 盡力做某事
【高分句型】
1．①When I was in trouble，you②used to encourage me and cheer me up．
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．in trouble 處于困境
②used to do sth 過(guò)去常常做某事，cheer up 使振奮起來(lái)．
2．①Once I ②argued with my classmates and I didn't know③how to deal with it．
①once 副詞．曾經(jīng)．
②argue with sb 與某人爭(zhēng)吵
③疑問(wèn)詞+to do sth 作為know的賓語(yǔ)． deal with 處理
3．I'm ①so thankful to you for your love and care that I'll work harder and ②try to do better in the future．
①so…that如此…以至于，that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．
②try to do sth 盡力做某事

解答 Dear Mum/Dad/Mum and Dad，（感謝的對(duì)象）
   Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you．You've taken good care of me in the past three years．When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me up．【高分句型】（感謝原因）Once I argued with my classmates and I didn't know how to deal with it．【高分句型】You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others．With your help，I've become a popular boy and made a lot of friends．（舉例說(shuō)明）I'm so thankful to you for your love and care that I'll work harder and try to do better in the future．【高分句型】（感受和打算）
Best wishes
Yours
Zhang Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 在初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活中，父母、老師給了我們很多幫助．假設(shè)你是李明，在即將畢業(yè)之際，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一段文字以表達(dá)感激之情．感謝的對(duì)象在父母、老師中任選其一，根據(jù)這個(gè)內(nèi)容可知這里敘述的過(guò)去的事情，所以句子應(yīng)該用過(guò)去時(shí)．后面的感受及打算部分句子應(yīng)該用將來(lái)時(shí)．要注意句子上文之間的銜接．本文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，增加了文章的色彩．短文中還用了一些連詞，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)更加復(fù)雜化，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)