Question

【題目】寫作

改革開放以來，中國發(fā)生了巨大的變化，令人振奮。假設(shè)你是海外華人Mr. Li,回到了闊別40年的故鄉(xiāng)，你把祖國母親的巨大變化以及自己的感受寫在博客上，與大家分享。

	過去	現(xiàn)在
居住	大家庭擠在小房子里	寬敞明亮的大公寓
通訊	書信	手機(jī)；網(wǎng)絡(luò)
娛樂	聽收音機(jī)	看電視；玩電腦
交通	自行車，步行上學(xué)，上班	自己開車；地鐵；公交車；出租車

要求：1.表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；

2.必須包含所有信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3.字?jǐn)?shù)在100字左右；

4.不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等。

Changes in people’s lives

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Answer 1

【答案】

Changes in people's lives

Great changes have taken place in people's lives in the past 40 years. In the past,a big family had to live in a small house. People kept in touch with relatives and friends by writing letters. They listened to the radio for news and other information. Children used to go to school on foot or by bike.

Now more and more people live in big and bright flats. People can talk to others over the telephone or on the Internet. Almost every family has TVs and computers. Today,people still ride their bikes to school or work,but they can also travel by bus,taxi,or underground. More and more families have their own cars.

In a word,people live better than before. Mr. Li is so excited to see these changes!

【解析】

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