Question

【題目】近年來，網(wǎng)絡(luò)籌款(Online fundraising)作為一種新型捐款方式出現(xiàn)在人們的視野中。由于網(wǎng)絡(luò)籌款能讓網(wǎng)民迅捷地獲知求助信息且捐款方便，人們通過“愛心籌”、“輕松籌”這些網(wǎng)絡(luò)平臺為不少急需幫助的人雪中送炭，幫他們渡過了難關(guān)。然而隨著許多網(wǎng)絡(luò)籌款騙局的揭露，如“羅一笑事件”的發(fā)酵與炒作，一些網(wǎng)民對網(wǎng)絡(luò)籌款的真實性及透明度提出質(zhì)疑，并表示網(wǎng)絡(luò)籌款不能成為騙捐的溫床。針對這一話題，九年級一班的同學(xué)們展開了討論。

假如你是正方或反方的一員（只需選擇一方），請圍繞你的觀點，結(jié)合親身經(jīng)歷來說服同學(xué)們。

要求：1. 詞數(shù)不少于80詞；

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名。

Answer 1

【答案】With the development of the Internet, there are more and more online fundraising on it. In my opinion, online fundraising is necessary if we can identify the truth.

Last term, my classmate’s mom had a serious illness and was in hospital for a long time, which almost ran out of all their savings. She was so sad that she couldn’t concentrate her mind on study, so I decided to help her. I tried sending messages to the network platform to ask for help. To my surprise, it did work and I received feedback. So I encouraged other classmates to repost my message and make sure the truth of it. Three days later, my classmates collected enough money to afford her mother’s medical expense. Later, her mother recovered well, and she appreciated those people who helped her so much.

As you see, online fundraising is really helpful and necessary for us, which can give others a hand in time.

【解析】

這是一篇開放性話題作文，結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，談一談對“網(wǎng)絡(luò)籌款(Online fundraising)” 這一種新型捐款方式的認(rèn)識，需要考生充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，創(chuàng)造和思維能力�？忌�首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示去認(rèn)真審題，選擇是作為正方還是的反方的一員，確定出文章的中心。根據(jù)提供的英語詞組去選擇組織材料，列出寫作提綱，結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要會用到兩種時態(tài)，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)及一般過去時態(tài)。人稱為第一人稱，同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。