Question

19．安全對每個人都很重要．請根據(jù)以下信息內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇關(guān)于安全的英語小短文．

鍛煉	小心運動；避免受傷
課間	上下樓梯，不要擁擠（crowd together）；…（至少一點）
交通	…（至少兩點）
食品	健康飲食，遠離垃圾食物（junk food）
其它	…（至少兩點）

要求：
1．語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整；
2．短文可以適當發(fā)揮，但要包含以上要點；
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名及地名；詞數(shù)100左右 （開頭和結(jié)尾已給出不計入詞數(shù)）．
Safety has become the focus for us all．How to keep safe is very important to us students．                  ．
In a word，it's important for everyone to remember these safety tips．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
First，we should be①careful enough not to get hurt②while we are playing sports．首先，我們應(yīng)該在做運動的時候足夠仔細不要受傷．
①adj+enough to do sth 足夠…做某事
②while引導的時間狀語從句，"在…時候"
【高分句型二】
Fourth，we should be careful not to eat unhealthy food and①keep away from junk food，②which③is harmful to our health第四，我們應(yīng)該注意不要吃不健康食品，遠離垃圾食品，它們對我們的健康有害．
①keep away from遠離…，后可加名詞．
②which作為關(guān)系詞的非限制性定語從句，修飾前面的整個句子．
③be harmful to …對…有害．

解答 Safety has become the focus for us all．How to keep safe is very important to us students．First，we should be careful enough not to get hurt while we are playing sports．【高分句型一】（鍛煉）Second，there are too many students between classes．We mustn't crowd togetehr especially when we walk upstairs or downstairs．And it's important for us not to fight with each other．（課間）Third，we must obey traffic rules on the way home or to school．When the light is red，we must never cross the road．It's very dangerous．（交通）Fourth，we should be careful not to eat unhealthy food and keep away from junk food，which is harmful to our health．【高分句型二】（食品）
Besides，we can't get into the water when we're alone or if there's a"NO SWIMMING"sign．What's more，we should be careful with fire at any time．（防火防水）
In a word，it's important for everyone to remember these safety tips．

點評 提綱作文是一項能夠充分考查學生語言綜合運用能力的題型．主要考查學生運用已學的語言基礎(chǔ)知識和已掌握的英語寫作技能準確表達客觀事實，闡述個人觀點，進行思想交流的書面表達能力．為了提高書面表達水平，平時應(yīng)加強閱讀，應(yīng)背誦一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要讀得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下筆成文．此外，還要了解英文寫作方面的基礎(chǔ)知識，掌握常用文體的寫作方法．其實，用英文寫信，記日記等都是學生力所能及且行之有效的練習寫作的好方法．