Question

1．假設(shè)你是李華，請在答題卡相應(yīng)位置用英語給你的美國筆友Jim寫一封電子郵件，告訴他以下事情：
1．感謝他給你寄來的那些書．你非常喜歡它們，每晚睡前都會讀幾頁．請他下次來信時給你介紹一些美國的節(jié)日．
2．非常盼望與他面對面交談，所以希望他明年夏天能來你的家鄉(xiāng)．你愿意作他的導(dǎo)游．你們可以一起參觀一些有趣的地方．
3．順便問一下，這些天他是否在電視中看世界杯．
注意事項(xiàng)：
1．文中不得出現(xiàn)涉及考生真實(shí)信息的人名、地名等內(nèi)容．
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫．
3．詞數(shù)70-110，開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：
郵寄：mail/post v．
導(dǎo)游：guide n．
世界杯：the World Cup
Dear Jim，
How is it going？Thank you for mailing the books to me．I like them so much that I read some pages
every day before going to bed．When you write to me next time，could you tell me something about American festivals such as Thanksgiving Day？
I do hope that you can come and visit my hometown next summer．On the one hand we can talk face to face and discuss some problems that we are both interested in．On the other
hand，I will be very happy to act as your guide and show you around some nice places．
By the way，are you watching the World Cup on TV these days？
Looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文是一篇提綱作文，因?yàn)槭菚�信的體裁，所以時態(tài)要根據(jù)實(shí)際情況注意變換，寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．感謝他給你寄來的那些書，請他下次來信時給你介紹一些美國的節(jié)日．2．非常盼望與他面對面交談，所以希望他明年夏天能來你的家鄉(xiāng)．3．順便問一下，這些天他是否在電視中看世界杯．

解答 Dear Jim
     How is it going？
     Thank you for mailing the books to me．I like them so much that I read some pages every day before going to bed．When you write to me next time，could you tell me something about American festivals such as Thanksgiving Day？
     I do hope that you can come and visit my hometown next summer．On the one hand we can talk face to face and discuss some problems that we are both interested in．On the other
hand，I will be very happy to act as your guide and show you around some nice places．
     By the way，are you watching the World Cup on TV these days？
    Looking forward to hearing from you．
     Yours
     Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 以提綱提供情景的作文，要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點(diǎn)．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時，要注意謂語動詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．