Question

【題目】根據(jù)圖片的內(nèi)容，以“Stops Him”，為題，用英語寫一篇文，向某英語報社投稿。求如下：(1)簡單描述圖中發(fā)生的事件；

(2)簡單分析媽媽的行為對孩子可能產(chǎn)生的不良影響；

(3)指出老人若不被扶起可能出現(xiàn)的后果：

(4)倡議人們彼此信任、互相幫助。

詞數(shù)：80-100標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：lift….up扶起 knock…..down撞倒 trust信任

Mother Stops Him

Here is a picture from a news report,In the picture ,we can see three people.An old woman is lying on the ground.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Mother Stops Him

Here is a picture from a news report. In the picture,we can see three people. An old woman is lying on the ground. A boy is going to lift her up, but his mother stops him at once. Don t do that! Others may think it’ s you who have knocked her down she says.

In my opinion, the mother’ s behavior is not right. A mother should encourage her child to give others a hand.How can a chlild become warm – hearted if he is educated in such a way? And the old woman might feel worse or e-ven be hit by the trafic unless we mo,re her away in time.

I hope it won ‘ t Happen again. Let’s trust each other and help anyone in trouble.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文。本文給出了一些要點，并給出了作文的開頭。我們要做的就是仔細觀察圖畫，用正確的英語把要點表達出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：這篇短文語句通順流暢，表達了圖畫以及所給的每一個要點。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。