【題目】（2016廣東深圳中考）書面表達(dá)

近年來，越來越多的外籍人士融入到深圳社區(qū)生活。假設(shè)你的小區(qū)也居住著這樣一個(gè)群體，社區(qū)委員會(huì)為豐南他們的生活，計(jì)劃在下周六專為外籍人士安排一次采摘荔枝活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你幫忙用英文寫一份書面通知，傳達(dá)給他們。

要點(diǎn)：

1) 下周六上午8:00在北門集合，乘大巴友“幸福農(nóng)場”采摘荔枝，下午4:30返回；

2) 享受鄉(xiāng)村自然美鏡，感受干農(nóng)活的樂趣；

3) 請(qǐng)?jiān)谙轮芩南挛?/span>6:00前去辦公室報(bào)名；

4) 你可以帶上……；另外.......

注意：

1)字?jǐn)?shù)：80字左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)）

2)文章必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容，并可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3)不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；

4)條理清楚，語句迪順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。

參考詞匯: 荔枝lychee 報(bào)名sign one's name 幸福農(nóng)場Happy Farm

NOTICE

June 25

In order to enrich the life of the residents （居民）, the Community Union is going to organize a special activity for next Saturday.

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Wish you a wonderful time!

The Community Union

【答案】NOTICE

June 25

In order to enrich the life of the residents (居民)，the Community Union is going to organize a special activity for next Saturday.

We have organized a bus trip to Happy Farm for foreigners, where we plan to pick lychees. We will gather at the North Gate at 8 a.m. and return at 4:30 p.m. next Saturday. During the trip, we can appreciate natural scenery in the countryside and have fun in farming work. Of course, you can take an umbrella so as not to get sunburnt. Besides, your safety should be taken into consideration.

Sign your name in our office before 6 p.m. next Thursday if you are interested.

Wish you a wonderful time!

The Community Union

【解析】

試題這篇作文是要求我們?yōu)樽约盒^(qū)里居住的外籍人士發(fā)布一個(gè)通知，內(nèi)容是關(guān)于社區(qū)組織一次荔枝采摘活動(dòng)。具體內(nèi)容包括：這次活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容；需要注意的事項(xiàng)等。其中的第四條內(nèi)容需要我們直接發(fā)揮想象力來補(bǔ)充。要注意在這樣的一個(gè)場景下，我們可以提出哪些建議，例如需要攜帶什么物品，注意安全等等。通過審題可知，這篇作文我們應(yīng)使用第一人稱We來敘述，主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。寫作時(shí)，可能用到的詞和短語如：organize組織；pick lychees采摘荔枝；gather 集合；enjoy scenery欣賞風(fēng)景；sign one’s name報(bào)名等等。寫作時(shí)，我們要注意英語表達(dá)和漢語的不同，要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。另外在短文里還應(yīng)使用一些平時(shí)積累的句型，將這些語言知識(shí)具體運(yùn)用到實(shí)踐中。使用一些連詞和從句，使文章的內(nèi)容更加連貫，表達(dá)更加流暢。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文，這篇短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目所給的所有信息，表達(dá)也很連貫、流暢。首先作者先點(diǎn)明了這次活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容，We have organized a bus trip to Happy Farm for foreigners, where we plan to pick lychees.在這里使用了一個(gè)定語從句，非常準(zhǔn)確；接下來是這次活動(dòng)的時(shí)間；然后是活動(dòng)中我們可以做的事情，we can appreciate natural scenery in the countryside and have fun in farming work.，使用了兩個(gè)短語appreciate natural scenery 和have fun doing sth.；下一個(gè)是作者自己補(bǔ)充的兩個(gè)內(nèi)容，you can take an umbrella so as not to get sunburnt. Besides, your safety should be taken into consideration.，帶著雨傘以免被曬，還有注意安全。這兩個(gè)建議都非常符合這篇短文說設(shè)置的情景。最后是說明了去報(bào)名這個(gè)信息，Sign your name in our office before 6 p.m. next Thursday if you are interested.，這句話中使用了一個(gè)if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。

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