Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)

假如你們學(xué)校要開(kāi)展“創(chuàng)建和諧校園(to build a harmonious campus)”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇倡議書(shū)，號(hào)召大家為創(chuàng)建和諧校園而努力。詞數(shù)：100詞左右。(短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))

要點(diǎn)提示：

1．努力學(xué)習(xí)，參加課外活動(dòng)；

2．有愛(ài)互助，尊敬師長(zhǎng)；

3．愛(ài)護(hù)花草樹(shù)木，不隨地亂扔廢棄物。

Our school is like our home．We should try to build up a harmonious campus．________________________________

Answer 1

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解析：

Our school is like our home．We should try to build up a harmonious campus． 　　First of all, we should work hard at our lessons．After school, we had better take an active part in all kinds of school activities to help improve our health and study． 　　Then we should be friendly to one another．We should respect our teachers and get on well with our classmates． 　　Thirdly, it is our duty to keep the school yard clean and tidy．We shouldn't throw wastes around or pick flowers． 　　Please do your best to make our school more and more beautiful． 　　評(píng)分說(shuō)明： 　　要求考生用適當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、句式和詞語(yǔ)，完整準(zhǔn)確地表述所提示的內(nèi)容，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整。分四檔評(píng)分： 　　1、短文通順完整，表達(dá)清楚, 語(yǔ)言基本無(wú)誤，12－15分; 　　2、短文較通順完整，表達(dá)基本清楚，語(yǔ)言有少量錯(cuò)誤，8－11分; 　　3、能寫(xiě)明基本要點(diǎn)，短文不夠通順完整，語(yǔ)言有較多錯(cuò)誤，但尚能達(dá)意，4－7分; 　　4、僅能寫(xiě)明部分要點(diǎn)，短文不完整，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤多，影響意思表達(dá)，0－3分。