Question

19．初中三年的學校生活就要結束了；回顧三年的學校生活；你（Jack）感慨萬分．校園網(wǎng)的英語論壇開辟了"My School Life"專欄，供同學們發(fā)表感言．請你為該專欄寫一篇短文，回顧自己三年的學校生活．
短文主要包括：回顧、感謝、祝愿等：回顧應涉及到生動有趣的課堂：活潑可愛的同學，豐富多彩的活動：自己的優(yōu)點及不足等，你可以適當發(fā)揮．
要求；字數(shù)在100詞左右，第一句已經(jīng)給出，不記入總數(shù)．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及校名．
I'm lucky to study in this beautiful school．The teachers are great．They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting．The classmates are lovely and friendly．The school life is rich and colorful．They make me happy every day．In the past three years，I am hardworking and have made great progress．I do well in the exams．I am good at communicating and I like to make friends with others．However，I have problems，too．I will spend less time online．I will do more sports and become stronger．Thank you my teachers and classmates．Wish my school more beautif ul，my teachers and classmates a happy life!
Jack from Class 3．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文，要求是校園網(wǎng)的英語論壇開辟了"My School Life"專欄，供同學們發(fā)表感言．請你為該專欄寫一篇短文，回顧自己三年的學校生活．寫作內(nèi)容應該包括：回顧三年的生活、感謝老師和同學、表達祝愿等，其中回顧三年的學校生活應涉及到生動有趣的課堂：活潑可愛的同學，豐富多彩的活動：自己的優(yōu)點及不足等，并可適當發(fā)揮．因為是回顧自己的校園生活，所以人稱用第一人稱，回顧三年的生活，可以用一般過去時，表達對老師同學們的祝愿及感謝時，可以用一般現(xiàn)在時．

解答 I'm lucky to study in this beautiful school．The teachers are great．They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting．The classmates are lovely and friendly．The school life is rich and colorful．They make me happy every day．
  In the past three years，I am hardworking and have made great progress．I do well in the exams．I am good at communicating and I like to make friends with others．
  However，I have problems，too．I will spend less time online．I will do more sports and become stronger．
  Thank you my teachers and classmates．Wish my school more beautiful，my teachers and classmates a happy life!
Jack from Class 3

點評 本題是一篇以提綱提供情景的作文，首先要注意審清主題，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點．其次要注意時態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換，用熟悉的句子來表達自己的觀點．這里給大家提供一些例句和短語，以供參考．
短語：
be lucky to do 很幸運做某事
make me happy   使我很開心
 make great progress  取得很大的進步
try one's best to do 盡某人最大努力做某事
be good at      擅長做某事
句型：
The teachers are great．They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting．老師們都很好．他們總是努力讓他們的課堂變得更活潑，更有趣．
The classmates are lovely and friendly．同學們都很可愛，也很友好．
Wish my school more beautiful，my teachers and classmates a happy life!
祝愿我的母校越來越美麗，老師和同學們生活幸福．