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5．隨著手機(jī)，Pad等電子設(shè)備的廣泛使用，越來越多的人花費(fèi)很多時(shí)間低頭玩pad和手機(jī)．Phubbing（低頭族）已成為讓人擔(dān)憂的現(xiàn)象，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹這一現(xiàn)象及問題，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh．

現(xiàn)象	1．上網(wǎng)聊天，觀看視頻；（或自擬內(nèi)容作答） 2．聚會(huì)乘車，到處可見；（或自擬內(nèi)容作答）
問題	1．低頭太多，影響健康；（或自擬內(nèi)容作答） 2．…（自擬一點(diǎn)作答）
你的看法和建議	…（自擬）

注意：1．表達(dá)中必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯．
2．詞數(shù)：90左右（開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
（參考詞匯：低頭 keep one's head down）
Phubbing
With the development of electronic products，Phubbing is becoming a serious problem among young people．       ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勀銓?duì)"低頭族"的看法和建議．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
【高分句型】
1．①Besides，②focusing on mobile phone entertainment can affect students'study．此外，專注于手機(jī)會(huì)影響學(xué)習(xí)．
①besides 另外
②動(dòng)名詞短語做主語．focus on專注于．
2．①If they fill their time this way，they won't have too much spare time ②to think about phone entertainment．如果他們這樣安排時(shí)間，他們就不會(huì)有太多的空閑時(shí)間去考慮電話消遣．
①if 引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．
②動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語．

解答 Phubbing
With the development of electronic products，Phubbing is becoming a serious problem among young people．Today many people，especially young people，are phone freaks．They spend a lot of time playing games，seeing movies，or reading novels on their smart phone，and thus communicate with their family and friends less．Without phone in hand，they will feel anxious and don't know what to do．（"低頭族"的表現(xiàn)）As we know，too long screen time is not good for health．It does great harm to our neck and eyes．Besides，focusing on mobile phone entertainment can affect students'study【高分句型】．（"低頭族"的危害）I think young people should spend more time doing sports or being with their family and friends．They should also pay more attention to their studies．If they fill their time this way，they won't have too much spare time to think about phone entertainment．【高分句型】（我的建議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇圖表作文，圖表作為書面表達(dá)的一種信息提示方式，比提綱作文線索顯得更簡(jiǎn)潔明了，寫作時(shí)也容易區(qū)分表達(dá)，本題在寫作時(shí)，要特別注意幾種情況的描述，不能逐句翻譯，同時(shí)要根據(jù)提示有效靈活的構(gòu)思，恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語，讓文章顯得有條理，不雜亂