Alan Brown ,男孩，14 歲，7年級4班學生。他喜歡玩電腦、做運動。他非常喜歡打籃球，他有5個籃球，但他沒有足球。他也喜歡漢語。他父母都是老師�，F(xiàn)在住在寧波。他還有一條黑白相間的狗叫Eddie,他們是好朋友。

要求：1.有詞準確；2.語句通順；3.表達清楚；4. 一定要包含所有信息。

字數(shù)60個左右。

 

【答案】

 

Alan Brown is a boy. He is 14 years old. He is in Class Seven，Grade Four. He likes playing computer games and playing sports. His favorite sports is playing basketball，and he has five basketballs.But he doesn’t have soccers. He likes Chinese also. His parents are all teachers. Now they are living Ningbo. Besides, he has a black and white dog ,Its name is Eddie. They are good friends.

【解析】

試題分析：試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，題目中給出的材料較為詳細。動筆前應根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關鍵單詞等問題。寫作中注意將材料所給內(nèi)容介紹清楚，亦可適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱進行描述，注意時態(tài)和主謂一致等問題。寫作中注意使用敘述順序，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用的句式短語較為簡單.如:He is……；He likes……；play basketball打籃球；等。但是通過一些連詞，如：and等的使用，使得文章避免單純的重復，使得短文既通俗易懂又邏輯清楚。讓我們對布朗及其家人有了一個比較全面的了解，不失為一篇上等作文。

考點：考查提綱作文。

 

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