Question

14．假設(shè)你是李杰，正通過 e-mail 和美國友好姐妹校的朋友 Tom 交流校紀(jì)班規(guī)，請你用英語向他介紹下面的"班級公約"．

要求：
1、內(nèi)容完整，書寫清楚，表達(dá)通順，書寫規(guī)范；
2、請勿逐字翻譯，詞數(shù)90左右，不包含已給出的句子的詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：school uniform；be active in thinking 
Dear Tom，
I'd like to introduce my class rules made by us all．First，we should…
It's our duty to follow all the rules above．What about yours？Please write soon．
                                                                           Yours，
                                                                            Li Jie．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文的主題是談?wù)摪嗉壒�約，交流班規(guī)校紀(jì)，貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際，因?yàn)槭羌o(jì)律規(guī)定，所以描述起來，可以用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，并且可以用到must、have to/ought to/be supposed to等句式．

解答 Dear Tom．，
I'd like to introduce my class rules made by us all．First，we should come to school on time in school uniforms．It's
polite to greet our teachers when we meet them．Second，we must listen carefully in class and be active in thinking．Also，we ought to do our homework carefully and hand it in on time．Third，we need clean the classroom often and always keep it clean．And we're required to turn off lights and close windows and doors before we leave．Fourth，being friendly is important．
We're supposed to get along well and help each other to make progress together．It's our duty to follow all the rules
above．What about yours？Please write soon．
Yours，
Li Jie

點(diǎn)評 以提綱提供情景的作文，要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點(diǎn)．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時，要注意謂語動詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．