Question

【題目】VIII.書面表達(dá)（滿分15分）

91.你的美國朋友John計(jì)劃暑假來中國旅游。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖示，用英語在QQ中給他留言，介紹并推薦你的家鄉(xiāng)福建，詞數(shù)80左右。

要求：

1.必須包含所有提示信息，開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；

3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓校名及提示信息以外的地名。

Hi，John, I’m glad to hear that you're planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I'd like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit.

Fujian lies __________________________________________________________________

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I'm looking forward to meeting you!

Answer 1

【答案】Hi，John, I'm glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I，d like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit,

Fujian lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital city. It has a population of over 38 million. Because of the nice environment, it’s known as Refreshing Fujian, which attracts millions of tourists from home and abroad. If you come, you can enjoy fresh air, blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers. Many famous places of interest like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island are well worth visiting. Besides，you can taste various kinds of delicious food.

I'm looking forward to meeting you!

【解析】這是一篇看圖作文。根據(jù)圖示可知主要介紹福建省的位置，省會(huì)城市，人口，名勝，環(huán)境及其他的相關(guān)內(nèi)容。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意主謂一致性。在組成文章時(shí)注意語言的邏輯性，詞匯要合適豐富。這篇短文內(nèi)容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上很好地使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。同時(shí)，文章中高分作文比較多，如：Because of the nice environment，it's known as Refreshing Fujian．句中使用短語有："because of 因?yàn)?/span>"、"be known as 作為…而著名"．If you come，you can enjoy fresh air，blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers．句中"If you come"為條件狀語從句，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。