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9．衛(wèi)生健康飲食：健康一直是人們關(guān)注的問題我校要舉行以"關(guān)愛健康"為題的主題班會，請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ瑢懸黄?0字左右的演講槁．
1）保持健康的重要性
2）保持健康的方法
1）多吃水果蔬菜保持飲食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物
2）多鍛煉健身強體；
3）鄙棄不良習(xí)慣            （你的看法？）
Dear boys and girls，
It is true that health is the first step to success．Imagine this，if you're sick，all you can do is to stay in bed and do nothing at all，how can you chase after your dreams？But if you're in good health，you can overcome the difficulties and make your dreams come true．Since health is so important for everybody，how can wekeep our health？Here is my advice about how to keep health？As a middle school student，first you'd better do more exercise such as playing ball games，running，swimming and jumping rope．Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals．Don't eat too much meat and sugar，but eat more vegetables and fruit．Third you need enough sleep or rest．Next keep yourself happy．As people often say smiling makes younger．At last you mustn't drink wine or smoke．They are bad for your health．In conclusion，if we pay close attention to our health，we can avoid getting sick．Try to sleep earlier，eat more fruit and vegetable，drink more water，and do exercise everyday．You will realize that it's not that hard to stay in good health．I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life．Thank you．bye�。�

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容談?wù)劷】档闹匾�性和怎樣保持健康．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第二人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1保持健康的重要性
2保持健康的方法：
1）多吃水果蔬菜保持飲食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2）多鍛煉健身強體；3）鄙棄不良習(xí)慣
3我的看法
常用到的重點短語：
had better do sth最好做某事
such as 例如
pay attention to注意，留意
be bad for 對…有害
try to do sth盡力做某事
in good health 身體健康
【高分句型】
1．①Since health is so important for everybody，how can we②keep our health？
①since既然，引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．
②keep healthy系表結(jié)構(gòu)，保持健康．
2．You will realize①that ②it's not  hard to stay ③in good health．
①that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句．
②It's+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式是真正主語．
③in good health 身體健康

解答 Dear boys and girls，
   It is true that health is the first step to success．Imagine this，if you're sick，all you can do is to stay in bed and do nothing at all，how can you chase after your dreams？But if you're in good health，you can overcome the difficulties and make your dreams come true．Since health is so important for everybody，how can we keep our health？【高分句型】（保持健康的重要性）Here is my advice about how to keep health？As a middle school student，first you'd better do more exercise such as playing ball games，running，swimming and jumping rope．Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals．Don't eat too much meat and sugar，but eat more vegetables and fruit．Third you need enough sleep or rest．Next keep yourself happy．As people often say smiling makes younger．At last you mustn't drink wine or smoke．They are bad for your health．（保持健康的方法）In conclusion，if we pay close attention to our health，we can avoid getting sick．Try to sleep earlier，eat more fruit and vegetable，drink more water，and do exercise everyday．You will realize that it's not  hard to stay in good health．【高分句型】（我的看法）I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life．Thank you．bye！

點評 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．