Question

【題目】書面表達。

假如你的好朋友叫王平，這里有他的個人情況，請根據(jù)漢語提示，給他作個介紹。

王平今年14歲，他每天花費一個小時看書，他閱讀面很廣，對科學方面的書很感興趣，周末他還喜歡去圖書館借書，圖書館就在他家對面。有時他和朋友們一起討論他所讀的書，彼此給對方建議，王平覺得讀書幫助他很多，1.使他學到了很多知識。2.使他更好地了解了世界。3.自擬一點

Answer 1

【答案】

Wang Ping is my good friend. He is a boy of fourteen. He enjoys reading a lot.

He spends an hour reading books every day. He always reads different kinds of books. He is very interested in science books. He likes to borrow books from the library on weekends. The library is across from his home. Sometimes he discusses the books he reads with his friends and gives their suggestions to each other.

Wang Ping thinks reading books helps him a lot. He learns lots of knowledge from books. And he knows better about the world. He likes writing stories. So reading different kinds of books makes him a better writer.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是一篇給提綱作文，要求根據(jù)提示信息介紹一下自己的好朋友王平的情況。根據(jù)提綱內(nèi)容，短文要從“愛好讀書；怎樣讀書；讀書的好處”三個方面展開寫作。短文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱單數(shù)。要注意語句通順，語法正確，語義連貫，中心突出。

寫作亮點：短文層次清楚，條理分明。第一段簡介好朋友的基本情況，并且以He enjoys reading a lot作為全文的中心句。第二段從不同的方面說明他是如何喜歡讀書，如何讀書的。重點突出，中心明確。其中用到了spend some time doing sth, be interested in sth, borrow from等等短語及句型結(jié)構(gòu)，使短文生動具體。第三段描述讀書的好處。本段用了動名詞作主語，learn from, know about,等等，為本文增色不少。