Question

現(xiàn)在學(xué)生們都是90后，對(duì)90后學(xué)生普遍具備的優(yōu)點(diǎn)進(jìn)行闡述（至少3點(diǎn)），可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。另外，作為一名90后學(xué)生，請(qǐng)結(jié)合你自己和周?chē)�同學(xué)的表現(xiàn)，列舉至少2點(diǎn)不足之處進(jìn)行描述。最后， 請(qǐng)根據(jù)你自己的感悟，對(duì)即將開(kāi)始初中生活的新生提出你的建議。
不少于80詞，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整。
As post 90s students, we have so many advantages.                                

Answer 1

  As post 90s students, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also energetic. We like to do sports . Most of us work hard in class and play happily.
On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. To tell you the truth, some of us are a little impolite. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in a correct ways. We are so careless that we often make some mistakes in our studies and lives.
As post 90s students who will enter a middle school, I think you need to get used to school life as quickly as you can. You should work hard and take an active part in all kinds of activities. Boys and girls, the future is up to us to create.解析:
可用一些短語(yǔ)、句型。如:as…as one can, on the other hand, not only…but also…, in my opinion, so…that…
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