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【題目】書面表達(dá)

學(xué)校將在下周舉行英文演講比賽，Jack的話題是 “對我影響最深的人”，請根據(jù)以下材料，幫他組織一篇100字左右英文演講稿，介紹一下三位對他影響最深的人，并說說你的感想.

Persons	Job	Details
My mother	a teacher	1. forties; 2. full of love（至少舉一例說明）; 3. decide to donate her body after her death
Tan Dun	a composer	1. born in Hunan, China； 2. help build a bridge between the East and the West; 3. bring Chinese and Western music together;
Jackie Chan	a film star	1. nearly 100 films, join humour and exciting action together 2. win many awards; 3. spend many years doing charity work;

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. There are three persons who have influenced me most. They are my mother, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.

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【答案】

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. There are three persons who have influenced me most. They are my mother, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.

My mother is a teacher. She is in her forties. She has a heart full of love and she has donated blood many times. To my surprise, she has decided to donate her body after her death.

Tan Dun is a composer. He was born in Hunan, China. He has helped build a bridge between the East and the West. He has successfully brought Chinese and Western music together.

Jackie Chan is a film star. He has acted in nearly 100 films, In the films, he joined humour and exciting action together perfectly. He has won many awards. He is also a humanitarian. He has spent many years doing charity work. He is thought highly of by many people.

They are all my heroes. They are really worth learning from.

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