Question

14．節(jié)日讓我們快樂(lè)，節(jié)日也給我們以獨(dú)特的感受．假如你是王文，代表學(xué)校參加某英文網(wǎng)站以"My Favorite Festival"為題開(kāi)展的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，從中西方節(jié)日中任選其一，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿．
提示：1．說(shuō)出一個(gè)你喜歡的節(jié)日，并說(shuō)明理由．
2．描述自身的一次經(jīng)歷或你通常是怎樣度過(guò)這個(gè)節(jié)日的；
3．談?wù)勀銓?duì)這個(gè)節(jié)日的感受或建議．
要求：1．不少于80詞；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；
3．短文要包含所有的提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．

Answer 1

分析 文章從三個(gè)方面敘述了中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日---春節(jié)．春節(jié)是一年的開(kāi)始，它是一個(gè)非常重要的節(jié)日．節(jié)前打掃房子，裝飾房子，買新衣和置辦年貨．過(guò)節(jié)時(shí)，穿新衣，吃大餐，放鞭炮，玩耍．節(jié)后，走親訪友，其樂(lè)融融．分層次按提示一一敘述，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．

解答 參考范文：
    Would you like to know something about our Chinese traditional festivals？There are many traditional festivals in China．They are called Spring Festival，Mid-Autumn Day and other festivals．Let me tell you something about Spring Festival．
    In fact，Spring Festival is the beginning of a new year．It is the most important traditional holiday in China．A few days before the festival，I often clean my house．I can decorate houses with beautiful flowers and pictures．After that，we wear their new clothes．
    On the eve of the festival，family members usually get together and have big meals at home．At midnight，they set off fireworks to welcome the new day．During the festival，kids can get some money from old people．They only play and play，parents aren't angry to them．It usually lasts for 15 days．During it，people visit their relatives and friends，they often talk about what they did last year．
     Welcome to China to spend this holiday together!What happy days we have!
　                                   Wang Wen

點(diǎn)評(píng) 文章在表達(dá)時(shí)，使用了形容詞的最高級(jí)形式：the+adj．最高級(jí)，突出了春節(jié)的重要性．還用了something nice to eat，形容詞和不定式放在形容詞后，作后置定語(yǔ)，使得文章更出彩．