Question

下個(gè)學(xué)期，我們每一位同學(xué)即將進(jìn)入新的學(xué)校。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示，以“New School, New Life” 為題，用英文寫一篇80詞左右的短文，談一談你的新學(xué)校、新生活、新打算，（注：文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）
What kind of new friends and teachers would you like to have?
Why do you want to have this kind of new friends and teachers?
What do you think your new school life will be like?
How will you improve yourself in the future?
New School, New Life
I’m a student in a secondary school and will graduate in two months. I hope to ___________________________________________________________________  
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Answer 1

I’m a student in a secondary school and will graduate in two months. I hope to study in a beautiful high school. I want to have lots of good friends. My new teachers will be very friendly to me and I can learn a lot from them. In the new school, we will have enough time to do after-school activities. The life will be very colorful. If I have some problems in the new school, I can go to a ‘buddy club’ for help. In the future, I will do my best to improve myself. I believe I will be better and better.

這是一篇命題作文，所給材料比較簡(jiǎn)單，故寫作前先要圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料確定寫作內(nèi)容。在寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語(yǔ)言的規(guī)范性。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在及將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。