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【題目】書面表達(dá)（滿分15分）

國(guó)務(wù)院召開了青少年校園足球工作電視電話會(huì)議，要求教育部主導(dǎo)并開展足球進(jìn)校園這項(xiàng)工作�！禩he 21st Century》就此開展了以“Football into the campus”為題的英語征文活動(dòng)。以下表格是你班同學(xué)的討論結(jié)果。請(qǐng)寫一篇英語短文，根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容陳述班級(jí)討論情況，并表明你的觀點(diǎn)及其理由。

贊成	世界第一運(yùn)動(dòng)；強(qiáng)身健體；豐富校園生活
不贊成	有受傷風(fēng)險(xiǎn)；場(chǎng)地有限；帶有強(qiáng)制性

注意：

1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

2. 語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

3. 詞數(shù)80詞左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Football into the campus

Recently, our class has done a survey on the hot topic “Football into school”. Here is the result.

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version:

Recently, our class has done a survey on the hot topic “Football into the campus”. Here is the result.

Those who agree to the proposal think that football is considered as the No.1 sports all over the world. Besides, playing football can make students much healthier and stronger. Also, after-school activities will be more colourful.

Quite a few students are against the proposal. They think it dangerous for students to play football because they’ll easily get hurt. What’s more, some schools are so small that the students cannot find enough space to play football. And schools should also allow students to make choices according to their own interests.

In my opinion, “Football into the campus” offers us a good chance to do sports. If you love football, why not go to the playground and have a good time playing football with your classmates? And it is also great fun to watch your classmates playing and cheering them on.

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求學(xué)生就足球進(jìn)校園活動(dòng)進(jìn)行辯論，說出造成及反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn)，要求語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范。首先要說出足球進(jìn)校園的利弊，然后再說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。闡述利弊時(shí)把雙方的觀點(diǎn)直接說出即可，本著事實(shí)本身。用三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；而在表明自己觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，一定要說明自己的簡(jiǎn)單理由，用第一人稱。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇范文表述清楚，包含了所提示的所有要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)也表明了作者自己的看法。語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚。第一自然段開門見山，直奔主題；第二自然段寫出造成方的看法；第三自然段則寫出了反對(duì)者的意見。最后寫出自己的觀點(diǎn)。層次分明，條理清楚。作者在文中用了定語從句，不定式作主語的結(jié)構(gòu)，用了：what’s more; quite a few 等結(jié)構(gòu)也使文章生動(dòng)。