Question

16．根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文．
一個健康的身體是每一個人工作和學習的根本保證，怎樣才能保持健康的體魄呢？
要點：
1、健康對我們很重要．
2、注意飲食．吃健康食品，不吃垃圾食品
3、經(jīng)常鍛煉
4、養(yǎng)成良好的衛(wèi)生習慣，早起早睡．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：Firstly，pay attention to your diet．Eat more vegetables and fruit．They are good for health首先，注意飲食，多吃蔬菜和水果，它們對健康有好處．pay attention to注意，to是介詞，后面加名詞或名詞短語等；be good for對…有好處．
高分句型二：If you want to have a strong body，do it like that如果你想有一個強壯的身體，就這樣做．這是由if引導的條件狀語從句；want to do sth．想要做某事．

解答 Health is important to us．（開篇點題說明健康的重要性）How to keep healthy？Let me give you some advice．
Firstly，pay attention to your diet．Eat more vegetables and fruit．They are good for health．（高分句型一）You shouldn't eat too much meat．Don't eat junk food，such as ice cream and hamburgers．They do harm to us．
Secondly，doing exercise every day is necessary．It can help us keep away from getting fat．
Finally，you should have a good living habit．We should sleep for about 8 hours at night．You shouldn't work too hard．Go to bed early and get up early．（怎樣才能保持健康的體魄）
If you want to have a strong body，do it like that．（高分句型二）（發(fā)出號召）

點評 （1）句型多樣化，不要I（We）…到底，使人覺得乏味．（2）適當使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句．（3）進一步描繪人或事物時，適當使用定語從句．（4）適當使用分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動詞．（5）偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感．