Question

11．假設(shè)你班為了配合創(chuàng)建"文明城市"，最近以""為題進(jìn)行了討論，請根據(jù)以下提示，用英文寫一篇短文，向其他人介紹你班討論的結(jié)果．

Title	Better City，Better Life
In the future	Better environment      happier life Live longer             less pollution
What should we do now？	Protect the environment     obey the traffic rules Be more friendly           take more exercise
Yourself	What should I do now？

要求：
1．文章必須包括所提供的主要信息，可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮
2．字?jǐn)?shù)：90詞左右（開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
Better City，Better Life
Our city will become more and more beautiful in the future．                                         

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It's our duty to keep our city clean and tidy讓我們的城市干凈整潔是我們的職責(zé)．
it's one's duty to do sth做某事是某人的職責(zé)．
【高分句型二】
To stay healthy，we ought to take more exercise為了保持健康我們應(yīng)該更多的鍛煉．
動詞不定式做目的狀語．

解答 Better City，Better Life
Our city will become more and more beautiful in the future．The environment will be better，and people's lives will be happier than before．There will be less pollution in our city，people can live longer than before，too．（未來）As students，we should stop anyone from polluting the environment．It's our duty to keep our city clean and tidy．【高分句型一】We should obey the traffic rules．People should be more friendly with each other．To stay healthy，we ought to take more exercise【高分句型二】（應(yīng)該怎么做）．I think I can talk with my friends about what to do and I will ask my family members to join us in protecting environment．So let's take action from now on so that we can reach our aim"Better City，Better Life"（我應(yīng)該怎么做）

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