Question

【題目】書面表達

以“My Mother”為題，寫一篇80字左右短文介紹你媽媽。

1. 外貌：高且苗條，有一頭烏黑的長發(fā)，喜歡穿裙子和靴子，看起來又年輕又漂亮。

2. 職業(yè)：在家附近的一家大商場里做售貨員，對顧客（customers ）很友好。

3. 生活方式很健康，每天走路去上班，吃很多蔬菜和水果。

4. 你很愛你的媽媽，因為……（自擬一至兩點）

My Mother

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Answer 1

【答案】

My Mother

My mother is tall and slim. She has long black hair. She likes to wear dresses/skirts and boots. It makes her look young and pretty.

She is a shopkeeper in a shopping mall near our home. She is kind to customers.

She has a healthy lifestyle. She walks to work every day and eats a lot of vegetables and fruit.

I love my mother very much, because she loves me very much.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者介紹自己媽媽的情況，小作者首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如She has a healthy lifestyle. She walks to work every day and eats a lot of vegetables and fruit.等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。