Question

17．畢業(yè)前的班會上，老師想讓大家暢所欲言，談?wù)勅�年來的收獲以及感想．下面表格是老師要求你談到的三個方面，請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，寫一篇短文，來談?wù)劙桑?br />

About study	learn…； improve…
About friends	make friends…； get along with…
About future	…

要求：1．短文須包括所有提示和你補充的內(nèi)容；
2．短文中涉及的三個要點都要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3．短文中不得涉及真實的人名、校名和地名；
4．詞數(shù)：80個左右（已給出的開頭和結(jié)尾不計入總詞數(shù)）．
Hello，everyone，
I have a lot of things to share with you．First，I want to talk about my study．During the past three years，I have learned many subjects，like English，maths and so on．I study hard，and many of my subjects have improved．
Second，I'd like to say something about making friends．I have made many friends，we often help and learn from each other，and we get along well with each other．
At last，I want to tell you about my future．I like helping people，so I think I can be a doctor when I grow up．That is my dream．
．
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
we get along well with each other我們彼此相處的很好．
get along well with sb：與某人相處
【高分句型二】
 I think ①I can be a doctor②when I grow up．我認(rèn)為當(dāng)我長大了我能成為一名的醫(yī)生．
①think后是省略that的賓語從句．
②when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句

解答 Hello，everyone，
I have a lot of things to share with you．First，I want to talk about my study．During the past three years，I have learned many subjects，like English，maths and so on．I study hard，and many of my subjects have improved．（學(xué)習(xí)）
Second，I'd like to say something about making friends．I have made many friends，we often help and learn from each other，and we get along well with each other【高分句型一】．（朋友）
At last，I want to tell you about my future．I like helping people，so I think I can be a doctor when I grow up．【高分句型二】That is my dream．（未來）
That's all．Thank you!

點評 提綱類作文的要點都給了出來，在寫作的時候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點連接成一個整體．同時注意使用高級詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點．