Question

學(xué)校的“English Center”是同學(xué)們練習(xí)英語(yǔ)的場(chǎng)所。這里的“Teenager Hotline”每天都能收到不少同學(xué)的咨詢(xún)電話(huà)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)當(dāng)時(shí)熱線(xiàn)咨詢(xún)員Mary對(duì)Lucy同學(xué)所咨詢(xún)問(wèn)題的電話(huà)記錄和對(duì)她提出的建議進(jìn)行整理，以“Make home a happier place to be”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)小短文向《TIMES》“作品秀”欄目投稿。（字?jǐn)?shù)100左右）

Problem	Advice
I can’t get on well with my parents. When I want to dress in a modern way, they don't like me wearing a mini-skirt. When I am making phone calls to friends, they ask if I’m speaking to a boy or a girl. Could you tell me what I shall do?	j Talk to them about your school life and your plans for the future. k Tell them your needs and find out what their needs are. l Do some housework you can. They will feel that you are no longer a small child.

Answer 1

Maybe you think your parents don’t understand you. They stop you from dressing in a modern way. They mind who you’re calling. You seem not so close to them as you used to be. How can you get on well with them? Here are some ideas:
1. Talk to them about your school life and your plans for the future.
2. Tell them your needs and find out what their needs are.
3. Do some housework you can. They will feel that you are no longer a small child.
If you follow these steps, slowly, you will break down the walls between you and them. Make home a happier place to be.

解析試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點(diǎn)中給出了寫(xiě)作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，然后圍繞材料適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，確定時(shí)態(tài)主要詞匯等問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。另外，在描述時(shí)，應(yīng)該注意人稱(chēng)的變化。
考點(diǎn)：重點(diǎn)考查學(xué)生的語(yǔ)句的組織能力
點(diǎn)評(píng)：在寫(xiě)書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)首先要注意的問(wèn)題就是人稱(chēng)，不能混淆人稱(chēng)；其次，應(yīng)注意動(dòng)詞的應(yīng)用，根據(jù)不同的人稱(chēng)確定動(dòng)詞的形式；再次，句型應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；最后，用自己熟練掌握的句型造句。