Question

你是一名八年級(jí)的學(xué)生，星期天你和班里的同學(xué)乘校車去敬老院參加了社區(qū)志愿者活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的日記。

審題思路

1. 由題干可知，此為一篇日記。

2. 主題事件：went to the old people’s home on Sunday

3. 活動(dòng)描述：help them do a lot of things,such as sweeping the floor，cleaning the windows  

4. 心得收獲：I think it’s our duty to help the old people.

寫(xiě)作提醒

1. 日記一般用一般過(guò)去時(shí)描述發(fā)生過(guò)的事情。

2. 寫(xiě)作時(shí)需用第一人稱敘述。

3. 敘述事件時(shí)，注意先后順序。

常用表達(dá)

1. We took the school bus to the old people’s home.

2. The old people greeted us happily and they were very pleased to see us.

3. We swept the floor for the old people.

4. Some girls danced for them and we enjoyed ourselves today.

5. We helped the old people (to) clean their house.

6. I think it’s our duty to help the old people.

連句成篇

根據(jù)題目要求及要點(diǎn)，運(yùn)用作文模板，在橫線上填上適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容。 

Sunday                          Fine 

Today,we to        the old  people’s home. The old people greeted us happily and they        see us.  We       volunteered  to help  them do a lot of things there. We           and cleaned the windows and the tables. Some girls        and we        today.  Finally, we       the  old people  and them. The dishes were delicious. I think       help the old people.

Answer 1

took the school bus;were very pleased to;swept the floor;danced for them;enjoyed ourselves;cooked meals for;had lunch together with;it’s our duty to