Question

【題目】 下學(xué)期，你的表弟Tom將要作為交換生到你們班上學(xué)習(xí)，班主任請你在班會課上介紹下Tom的情況，以便讓同學(xué)們更快地了解他。請根據(jù)下列提示，寫一篇80詞左右的文章。

姓名	Tom
年齡	13歲
興趣愛好	最喜歡金魚，喜歡觀看它們游來游去。 喜歡各種戶外運動，常去野營。
能力	1.文章寫得好、鋼琴彈得好 2.思維敏捷、計劃周密
品性事跡	1.樂于助人。是社區(qū)中心的志愿者，幫助人們解決各種問題。經(jīng)常參加為貧困的孩子募集錢這樣的活動。 2.很有幽默感，講有趣的笑話，使我大笑

要求：

1.條理清楚，語意連貫。

2.書寫規(guī)范，標(biāo)點正確。

3.正文80字左右。

Hello, everyone. My cousin Tom will come to our class as an exchange student. Now I would like to tell you something about him.

My cousin Tom is_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

After Tom enters our class, you will know more about him. You will find that he is really kind and excellent. He will be our good friend.

That's all. Thanks for listening.

Answer 1

【答案】例文

Hello, everyone. My cousin Tom will come to our class as an exchange student. Now I would like to tell you something about him.

My cousin Tom is 13 years old. He has many hobbies and interests. He likes gold fish best and likes watching them swim around. He also loves all kinds of outdoor sports. He often goes camping because he likes being outside.

Tom has different abilities. He writes good articles and plays the piano well. He learns things quickly and plans everything well.

Tom has many good qualities. He is helpful and is a volunteer at the community center. When people have all kinds of problems, he is ready to help them. He often takes part in activities like raising money for poor children. Tom is very humorous and often tells us jokes to make us laugh.

After Tom enters our class, you will know more about him. You will find that he is really kind and excellent. He will be our good friend.

That's all. Thanks for listening.

【解析】

1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求按照所給的提綱，就年齡、興趣愛好、能力和品性事跡來介紹自己的表弟Tom。寫作內(nèi)容要涵蓋題干中要求的要點，緊扣題目。寫作前要注意分層描寫，理順流程內(nèi)容，力爭做到言簡意賅，語句流暢。文章主體人稱為第三人稱，主要時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在式。