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12．在學(xué)校開展的青春期心理健康系列主題活動中，你將用英語與同學(xué)們分享你對如何與父
母相處的看法．請你寫一篇"Learning to get along with our parents"的發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

現(xiàn)象	1）不少人感到與父母難相處； 2）很多人認(rèn)為父母太嚴(yán)格，比如：不允許在外與朋友玩得太晚，不允許…（考生自擬，至少1點(diǎn)） 3）經(jīng)常對父母發(fā)脾氣，甚至幾天不講話
原因	1）父母過分關(guān)注分?jǐn)?shù)，焦慮； 2）我們…（考生自擬，至少1點(diǎn)）
措施	1）我們應(yīng)該轉(zhuǎn)變，和父母多溝通； 2）我們享受興趣愛好之時(shí)，勿忘學(xué)業(yè)； 3）我們…（考生自擬，至少1點(diǎn)）

要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；
2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3）詞數(shù)：90詞左右（演講稿的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等．
Good morning，ladies and gentlemen．Today my topic is Learning to get along with our parents．
These days，most of us feel       ．
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①This is because parents care for the marks too much  and  we are too naive．這是因?yàn)楦改柑�在意分�(jǐn)?shù)了，我們也太天真了．句子中because引導(dǎo)一個(gè)原因表語從句．
②Second，we are supposed to do some housework at home．第二，我們應(yīng)該在家做一些家務(wù)．句子中be supposed to do sth表示應(yīng)該做某事．

解答 Good morning，ladies and gentlemen．Today my speech  topic is"Learning to get along with our parents"．（引出話題）
　　These days，most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents．Many students have trouble in getting on with their parents．Many students think their parents are too strict，for example，they are not allowed to play with their friends too late，they are not allowed to live outside in the night． They often quarreled with their parents，so they don't like to talk with them．（與父母相處存在的現(xiàn)象）This is because parents care for the marks too much and  we are too naive．（高分句型）．（原因）How can we solve the problem？Well，first，we should respect our parents because they care for us all the time．Second，we are supposed to do some housework at home（高分句型）．We should help clean the room，cook meals and so on．Third，we should care for them，and have a talk with them about their work，．（措施）
　　That's all．Thank you!

點(diǎn)評 這是一篇圖表作文，所給材料比較詳細(xì)，且都用英語給出，故只需要將這些材料按照一定的邏輯順序組織成文即可．在寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性．