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【題目】書面表達

在你的生活中經(jīng)歷很多，如：才藝表演（talent show）、體育比賽（match）、考試（exam）、英語演講比賽（English speech competition）漢字聽寫大賽（Chinese dictation competition）或者其它事件等等，請你選擇一次給你感想很多或教訓(xùn)很大的事件，用難忘的經(jīng)歷（An unforgettable experience）為題寫一篇英語短文，100詞左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】

An unforgettable experience

Last summer holiday, I learned to swim. It was very unforgettable and interesting. I went to the swimming pool with my father. He taught me how to swim. At first, I was afraid of diving in the water. And I felt uncomfortable in the water. But father said it didn’t matter and he would protect me. Then I began to swim, but I couldn’t swim forward at all. It made me upset. Then father told me how to move, how to use my hands and legs. Slowly, I could move a little. In fact, it was not that easy. I learned it for almost half a month. I was excited when father told me I made it.

【解析】

試題分析：本文應(yīng)可以用第一人稱，時態(tài)是一般過去時態(tài)。作者靈活采用不同的表達方式將事件完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。最后必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。

寫作亮點：本文敘述條理清晰，行文流暢。語言豐富，句式多樣。如：learn to do, teach sb. to do sth, be afraid of等；使用了時間狀語從句、賓語從句等，使文章內(nèi)容更加銜接，一氣呵成，效果不錯。