Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

請(qǐng)以“我的朋友” 為題，寫一篇短文介紹你的好朋友Kate, 要點(diǎn)如下：

簡(jiǎn)介	1. Kate來自英國，現(xiàn)在和父母一起生活在泰州； 2. 戴著眼鏡，又高又苗條; 3.在一所中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)，老師、同學(xué)都對(duì)她很好。
愛好、特長	1.喜歡所有功課，最喜歡的科目是地理，因?yàn)樗�喜歡旅游 （travelling）； 2. 她擅長運(yùn)動(dòng)，認(rèn)為運(yùn)動(dòng)對(duì)她有好處，是校足球隊(duì)的一員; 3. 她也熱愛看書，經(jīng)常…….。
理想	她希望……(至少一點(diǎn))。

注意：1.短文須包括所給的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，要求語句通順，意思連貫；

1. 詞數(shù)80詞左右。開頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

My friend

Kate is my best friend. She _____________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

My friend

Kate is my best friend. She is from England. Now she lives in Taizhou with their parents. She is tall and slim.She always wears a pair of glasses. She studies in a middle school. The teacher and the students are very friendly to her. She likes all the subjects, but her favorite subject is geography because she likes travelling. she is good at sports. She thinks that sports are good for her. She can play football well. She is a member of the school football team. She also loves to read. She often borrows books from her school library. She hopes she will be a professional football player in the future. I think she can make her dream come true.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的朋友。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：She is……；she never eats…；She shares…及she can…等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)好友的愿望。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，接下來介紹朋友的特點(diǎn)和喜好，最后介紹了朋友的理想。文中用了一些固定短語如be friendly to， be good at，be good for等，還用了一些主從復(fù)合句如but her favorite subject is geography because she likes travelling. She hopes she will be a professional football player in the future.這些詞組和復(fù)合句的運(yùn)用都讓文章增色不少。