Question

假如你是一名九年級學生李強。你要寫一封信給青少年專家Sigmund Friend. 告訴他 你遇到的問題。并請求幫助，請根據(jù)下列信息 ，完成這封信。

姓名：李強     星座:Gemini     最喜歡的顏色：yellow

存在的問題： 父母要求很嚴格，幾乎沒空閑時間發(fā)展自己的愛好，如打籃球和聽音樂。瘋狂迷戀上網(wǎng)聊天。經(jīng)常很晚回家，不按時交作業(yè)。有時考試不及格。父母要求放棄上網(wǎng)聊天，把大部分時間花在學習上。為此你很苦惱。

目前需求：  希望得到建議

Dear Sigmund friend:

   My name is Li Qiang . I am a Grade 9 student.

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                                                                Yours

                                                              Li Qiang

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version：

  Dear Sigmund friend:

   My name is Li Qiang . I am a Grade 9 student. My star sign is Gemini. My favourite colour is yellow. I have some problems. My parents are too strict with me. I hardly have any spare time for my hobbies such as playing basketball and listening to music. I’m crazy about chatting online. I often go (get) home very late. I can’t hand in my homework in time. Sometimes I can’t pass the exam. My parents ask me to give up chatting online. They ask me to spend most time on studies. I feel worried about it. Could you offer me some valuable suggestions(advice)?

                                                                Yours

                                                              Li Qiang

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達應該根據(jù)所提供的信息，準確地自我介紹自己的姓名、星座、最喜歡的顏色以及生活中的問題。而且要注意書信格，正確地表達自己的求助意愿。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，書信格式正確。本文中運用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:be strict with, be crazy about, give up, valuable suggestions等。

考點：提綱作文。