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8．南京中考在即．假如你是班長，要求與學(xué)生談?wù)効记皫滋斓淖⒁馐马?xiàng)．以下五點(diǎn)必須全部包括在內(nèi)，也可適當(dāng)拓展．注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名及姓名，篇幅80-100詞．短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
1．合理飲食與睡眠．
2．消除焦慮，充滿信心．
3．適度復(fù)習(xí)并做適當(dāng)活動．
4．熟悉考場環(huán)境，如廁所、考場的位置等．
5．提出希望與祝福．
參考詞匯：考場環(huán)境：examination environment； 
Nanjing Senior high school entrance examination is coming．Everybody wants to do better in it．So get following things ready．First，It's very important for us to pay attention to our diet．Second，we should go to bed on time．You'd better not get too tired while revising your lessons．Third，don't be too nervous．It's necessary to take some exercise as you like．Also remember to get familiar with the examination environment，such as the toilet，the test room and so on．And above all，be confident of yourself．
If you get ready the things that I mention above，your dream will come true．Good luck，everybody!．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勚锌记皫滋斓淖⒁馐马?xiàng)．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第二、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．合理飲食與睡眠．
2．消除焦慮，充滿信心．
3．適度復(fù)習(xí)并做適當(dāng)活動．
4．熟悉考場環(huán)境，如廁所、考場的位置等．
5．提出希望與祝福．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
pay attention to 關(guān)注
on time 準(zhǔn)時
had better do sth 最好做某事
remember to do sth 記得去做某事
such as 例如
above all 最重要的
【高分句型】
1．First，①It's very important for us to②pay attention to our diet．
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．
②pay attention to 關(guān)注
2．①If you get ready the things ②that I mention above，your dream will come true．
①if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．
②that I mention above定語從句，that是關(guān)系詞作為從句的賓語，先行詞是things．

解答 Sample writing：
Nanjing Senior high school entrance examination is coming．Everybody wants to do better in it．So get following things ready．First，It's very important for us to pay attention to our diet（合理飲食）．【高分句型】Second，we should go to bed on time．You'd better not get too tired while revising your lessons（合理睡眠，適當(dāng)復(fù)習(xí)）．Third，don't be too nervous．（消除焦慮）It's necessary to take some exercise as you like．（做適當(dāng)活動）Also remember to get familiar with the examination environment，such as the toilet，the test room and so on．（熟悉考場環(huán)境）And above all，be confident of yourself．（充滿信心）
If you get ready the things that I mention above，your dream will come true．【高分句型】Good luck，everybody!（提出希望與祝福）

點(diǎn)評 本文是一篇給材料作文，短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出．寫作時先要圍繞這些要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意將這些要點(diǎn)全部表達(dá)出來，并且要有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在談到自己的觀點(diǎn)時，要結(jié)合活動內(nèi)容，寫出自己的觀點(diǎn)．