Question

【題目】作文

根據(jù)中文及英文提示，寫出語意連貫、符合邏輯的短文。所給英文提示詞必須都用上，中文提示內(nèi)容不要逐字翻譯。詞數(shù)80個左右。

中文提示：

一個雨天，李莉乘出租車回家，在車里發(fā)現(xiàn)司機在學(xué)英語，他對李莉說了什么?此事對你學(xué)習(xí)英語有何啟發(fā)？你打算怎么做？

英語提示：

1. one rainy day, go home, by taxi

2. in the car, find, learn English

3. said to Li Li, weak, English, when, at school, now, work hard

Answer 1

【答案】

One rainy day, Li Li went home by taxi. In the car she found the driver was learning English. He said to

Li Li,"I was weak in English when I was at school. Now I'm working hard at it to serve more foreign visitors. I think I should learn from the driver. English is very important to us because it is widely used for business

all over the world. As a student, I'll do my best to study English.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。把要點寫全面，不要漏掉任何要點。注意文章文體和時態(tài)。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。要求語句通順、意思連貫。中文提示內(nèi)容不要逐字翻譯。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：本文寫作思路清晰，時態(tài)運用也很得當(dāng)。更為難能可貴的是通篇文章沒有出現(xiàn)任何語法錯誤。

這篇短文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，行文連貫、表達清楚。最后寫出了自己的啟發(fā)與打算English is very important to us because it is widely used for business all over the world. As a student, I'll do my best to study English.