Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)：

作為一名中學(xué)生，要理解父母的辛苦勞作，要力所能及地幫助父母干一些家務(wù)活，以減輕父母的負(fù)擔(dān)，請根據(jù)提示以“Help My Parents”為標(biāo)題寫一篇文章，提示包括：

1、我有一個幸福的家庭，爸爸媽媽工作很辛苦，所以我經(jīng)常幫助父母干家務(wù)。

2、早晨起床后整理床鋪、打掃房間、掃地。

3、早餐后刷碗，然后去上學(xué)。

4、下午放學(xué)回家后幫助媽媽做晚飯、打掃客廳、倒垃圾，之后完成學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)。

5、周末洗衣服、疊衣服、幫助爸爸洗車、澆花。

6、參考詞匯：help my parents ,do chores, make the bed, sweep the floor, do the dishes, take out the trash, fold the clothes, clean the car, water the flowers

Help My Parents

__________________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

Help My Parents

I have a happy family. My parents work very hard. They want to make more money for our family. As a student, I should study hard and help my parents. So I often do many chores to help my mom and dad.

In the morning, I make the bed after I get up every day. Next I clean the room and sweep the floor. After breakfast I help my mom do the dishes. Then I go to school. In the afternoon, when I get back home from school, I usually help my mom cook dinner . After dinner, I clean the living room and take out the trash. Then I do homework and watch TV. On weekends, I often do the laundry and fold the clothes for my family. Sometimes I help my father clean the car and water the flowers.

My parents often say I am hard-working. I am glad to hear .

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。本文所給內(nèi)容比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些所給的點表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，是提出建議，給出自己的觀點的，注意說話的語氣及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：本例文層次緊湊，開始有總說，最后一段總結(jié)。這些句子 After dinner, I clean the living room and take out the trash； I often do the laundry and fold the clothes for my family.給文章增加了色彩。