Question

18．你們學校最近就"一個好朋友的標準"做了一次問卷調查，調查結果如下圖．請你以"What a good friend should be like"為題，用英語為你們學校的校報寫一篇短文，報道此次調查結果并談談自己的看法．

注意：1．詞數(shù)：80-100（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）
2．內容須包括以上要點，可適當發(fā)揮；
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名．
What a good friend should be like
Recently，we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like．About seven percent of the students prefer their friends should be beautiful or handsome．About nearly half of the students think that their friends should be hardworking and good at their lessons．Sixty-seven percent of the students hope their friends should be fond of singing and dancing，and also they should be good at sports．Almost all of the students agree that their friends should be not only lively，kind and helpful but also honest．Good friends should trust each other and share joys．I think to be honest is the most important for us all．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內容是以"What a good friend should be like"為題，針對一個好朋友的標準的問卷調查結果談談看法．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第三人稱輔以第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．調查結果：7%的學生認為是外表漂亮英俊
48%的學生認為是學習勤奮功課好
67的學生認為是%喜歡唱歌運動
95%的學生認為是心地善良，樂于助人，待人誠實
2．自己的看法
常用到的重點短語：
be good at擅長
be fond of 喜歡…
be honest 誠實的
not only…but also…不僅…而且…，
高分句型：
1．Almost all of the students agree①that their friends should be②not only lively，kind and helpful but also honest．
①agree后所接的由that引導的賓語從句．that可以省略．
②not only…but also…不僅…而且…，連接兩個對等成分，這里是連接一組形容詞，和be構成系表結構．
2．I think①②to be honest is the most important for us all．
①think后接的是省略了引導詞that的賓語從句．
②to be honest動詞不定式做主語，謂語用單數(shù)is．

解答 Recently，we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like．（點題）About seven percent of the students prefer their friends should be beautiful or handsome．（7%的學生認為是外表漂亮英�。〢bout  nearly half of the students think that their friends should be hardworking and good at their lessons．（48%的學生認為是學習勤奮功課好）Sixty-seven percent of the students hope their friends should be fond of singing and dancing，and also they should be good at sports．（67的學生認為是%喜歡唱歌運動） Almost all of the students agree that their friends should be not only lively，kind and helpful but also honest．（高分句型） （95%的學生認為是心地善良，樂于助人，待人誠實）Good friends should trust each other and share joys．I think to be honest is the most important for us all．（高分句型）（自己的看法）

點評 這是一篇給材料作文．本文給出了一些要點，并給出了作文的開頭．我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點．動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮．根據(jù)材料內容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題．寫作中要適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系．學習中注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理．