Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分15分）

Jack是一名九年級(jí)的學(xué)生，最近迷上手機(jī)游戲，經(jīng)常玩到深夜，睡眠不足，不能認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講，導(dǎo)致成績(jī)下降。媽媽很生氣，不再讓他使用手機(jī)。假如你是他的朋友Tina，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封信給他，建議他要合理使用手機(jī)，如查閱資料，記單詞等。同時(shí)，考試在即，要理解父母、老師的心情，要主動(dòng)去溝通，得到他們的原諒和幫助。

要求：

包含所給要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言流暢，意思連貫，適當(dāng)拓展；詞數(shù)80詞左右；開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：become poor in study; get angry with ; communicate with; forgive.

Dear Jack，

I am sorry to hear that you quarreled with your parents about playing mobile phone games.

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Yours

Tina

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jack，

I am sorry to hear that you quarrelled with your parents about playing mobile phone games.

You spent so much time playing games that you forgot when to sleep and you felt too sleepy and tired to listen to the teachers in class the next day. Because of these, you became poor in your study. Your mother got angry with you. You felt bad about this.

Firstly, I think you should stop playing games. You can use mobile phone to search for information, and look up new words. it is a useful tool in your study.

Secondly, you need to communicate with your parents and teachers, and let them know your problems. They will help you. at the same time ,they will forgive you for your mistakes.

I hope my suggestions are of great value to you.

Yours，

Tina

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要是作者Tina向朋友Jack關(guān)于他玩手機(jī)的問(wèn)題給他提出的建議；溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 ，文中段落清晰，給作者提供了有力的建議。You spent so much time playing games that you forgot when to sleep and you felt too sleepy and tired to listen to the teachers in class the next day在本句中用到了spend+時(shí)間+doing的結(jié)構(gòu)；try to do表示設(shè)法去做某事；另外文中還用到了Firstly；Secondly等表示順序的單詞；這些短語(yǔ)和句子的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。