Question

【題目】書面表達。

請根據(jù)下面提示，以Modern inventions為題，寫一篇100詞左右的短文。(標題和開頭已給出，不計入總次數(shù))

Introduction	許多現(xiàn)代發(fā)明給我們的生活帶來了巨大的變化。他們改變了我們的生活方式。（開頭已給出）
Main body	冰箱	在古代，人們使用鹽來幫助他們長時間的保存肉和魚。夏天時，新鮮食品會在幾小時變壞。而冰箱的發(fā)明解決了這一問題。
	洗衣機	過去，人們用手洗衣服。這既累又要花費很多時間。隨著洗衣機的發(fā)明，人們有了更多的時間來放松。
	飛機	很久以前，人們主要乘船去旅行�，F(xiàn)在飛機使得旅途變得更加舒適。
	……	……(請例舉一項現(xiàn)代發(fā)明，并談一談其給我們的生活帶來的變化)
Conclusion	總之，在現(xiàn)代發(fā)明的幫助之下，我們的生活得到了很大地改善。

Answer 1

【答案】

Many modern inventions have made a great difference in our life. They have changed the way we live.

In ancient times, people used salt to help them keep fish or meat for a longer time. Fresh food would go bad in summer in a few hours. The invention of the fridge has solved the problem.

In the past, people washed clothes by hand. It was tiring, and it took a lot of time. With the invention of the washing machine, people have had more time to relax.

In the old days, people travelled by ship. Now planes have made journeys more comfortable.

People kept in touch with each other by writing letters in the past. It often took long time to receive the reply. With the use of the Internet, people can easily get replies from each other by QQ, Wechat, or Face Book.

In a word, our life has improved greatly with the help of modern inventions.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如With the invention of the washing machine, people have had more time to relax.等，In the past等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。