Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中提供的信息，向同學(xué)們介紹你的新朋友 Henry.

Name	Henry
Age	14
Look	Tall, medium build, short curly hair, wear glasses
Hobby	Soccer
Favorite animals	Monkeys

 

Answer 1

I have a new friend. His name is Henry. He is 14 years old. He is tall and of medium build. He has short curly hair. And he likes reading. But he always wears glasses when he reads. He also likes sports and he plays soccer very well. His favorite animals are monkeys because they are smart and lovely. And his favorite food is vegetables because they are healthy. I like him very much.

試題分析：本文的寫(xiě)作不難，把握好介紹的條理性。首先用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)我的好朋友的名字、年齡、身材tall and of medium build.進(jìn)而對(duì)卷曲的頭發(fā)和常戴著眼鏡看書(shū)進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)he always wears glasses when he reads.，然后對(duì)他最喜歡的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)sports and he plays soccer very well和動(dòng)物His favorite animals are monkeys because they are smart and lovely及最喜歡的食物his favorite food is vegetables because they are healthy進(jìn)行介紹，并進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，說(shuō)明原因，最后一句話進(jìn)行總結(jié)I like him very much.
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文難度不大，寫(xiě)作條理性要把握好，對(duì)于初一的作文，不要求有很華美的詞語(yǔ)，重在培養(yǎng)自己連詞成句的能力，避免中式英文。在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中要多去背誦范文，對(duì)表達(dá)好的句子，短語(yǔ)要進(jìn)行積累，并默寫(xiě)，考試前再集中看一下，這樣做到有備無(wú)患。