Question

【題目】書面表達(dá) （共1題，滿分15分）

十九世紀(jì)七十年代，美國人Martin Cooper發(fā)明了手機。你了解手機有多少呢，你覺得學(xué)生可以帶手機到學(xué)校嗎？請談?wù)勀愕挠^點以及你的理由（至少三點理由）

發(fā) 明 人	Martin Cooper
時 間	In the 1970s
用 途	過去	打電話
	現(xiàn)在	1 拍照 2 上網(wǎng)聊天 3…… 4……
你的觀點 及理由	……. (至少三點理由)

Nowadays, the smart mobile phones have played an important role in our daily life. But do you know who invented（發(fā)明） the mobile phones?

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Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, the smart mobile phones have played an important role in our daily life. But do you know who invented the mobile phones? The first mobile phone was invented by Martin Cooper in the 1970s. In the past, it was only used to make a telephone call. But now people can use it to take photos or chant online. Some mobile phones can be used as an Mp3 or even Mp4. That is, we can listen to music or English with it. In my opinion, students shouldn’t be allowed to take phones to school. Using the mobile phone is bad for students. It will affect their study. Some students will play games or listen to music using their mobile phones in class .And they will send the information to their friends. That’s too bad for them to study well.

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求寫一篇以手機為主題議論文。利用表格中提供的一些信息，對手機的用途作一介紹，分析當(dāng)前的現(xiàn)狀，對學(xué)生可不可以帶手機到學(xué)校？手機的利與弊，談?wù)勛约旱挠^點以及理由。書寫時一定注意時態(tài)的正確使用。觀點分明，談及理由按照要求至少要寫三點。并注意上下文要語句貫通。

寫作亮點：文中兩個被動語態(tài)的句子使用的十分準(zhǔn)確：The first mobile phone was invented by Martin Cooper in the 1970s. In my opinion, students shouldn’t be allowed to take phones to school.介紹手機的用途時，轉(zhuǎn)折連詞but使用的很好，說明現(xiàn)在的手機用途越來越多。闡述自己的觀點時理由也很充分。