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10．課外活動(dòng)可以讓我們?cè)鲩L(zhǎng)知識(shí)，發(fā)展智力，開闊視野和塑造性格．許多學(xué)校創(chuàng)造性地開展了課外活動(dòng)，如朗誦、唱歌、講故事、演話劇、辦刊物以及舉辦各種體育活動(dòng)等．
最近，某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)開設(shè)了“After-class Activities”的欄目．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，為該欄目寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們積極參加課外活動(dòng)．
1．你校開展課外活動(dòng)的情況；
2．你參加過的課外活動(dòng)及給你帶來的益處；
3．為同學(xué)選擇課外活動(dòng)或?yàn)閷W(xué)校開設(shè)課外活動(dòng)提出建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)80以上；
2．文中不得提及具體人名、校名及地名；
3．稿件的開頭已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
提示詞：take part in　　　sports　　　interesting　　　favourite
After-class Activities
Nowadays，after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in junior schoolsIn our school there are various kinds of activities，for example，arts and sports．We enjoy them very much．Playing football and reading are my favorites which do me lots of good．Besides building my body and improving my skills，they also free me from the heavy work of study．Here I have some suggestions．To students，we’d better choose the activities which interest us and suit us； Schools should organize more activities for students and leave more time for activities by giving us less homework．
Dear friends，please actively take part in after-activities，which will not only make your school life colorful，but also improve your learning．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇是一篇提綱作文，作文前要仔細(xì)審題，寫作時(shí)要抓住文章的要點(diǎn)，寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．學(xué)校開展的課外活動(dòng)，2．你參加的課外活動(dòng)及給你帶來的好處，3．為同學(xué)選擇課外活動(dòng)以及提出的建議；此三要點(diǎn)在文章中缺一不可；寫作重點(diǎn)應(yīng)放在第2和第3要點(diǎn)上．根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容的需要，此文主要用第一人稱來寫，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．寫作時(shí)做到句意通順、意思連貫．
重點(diǎn)短語及句型：
more and more popular 越來越流行
various kinds of 多種多樣的
had better do sth 最后做某事
not only…but also…不但，而且
Playing football and reading are my favorites which do me lots of good．踢足球和閱讀是給我?guī)�來很多益處的我的最愛�?br />please actively take part in after-activities，which will not only make your school life colorful，but also improve your learning．請(qǐng)積極參加課外活動(dòng)，它不僅讓你的學(xué)校生活豐富多彩；而且能提高你的學(xué)習(xí)．

解答 After-class Activities
  Nowadays，after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in junior schools．【總領(lǐng)全文】In our school there are various kinds of activities，for example，arts and sports．We enjoy them very much．Playing football and reading are my favorites which do me lots of good．Besides building my body and improving my skills，they also free me from the heavy work of study．【介紹學(xué)校及你參加的課外活動(dòng)及益處】Here I have some suggestions．To students，we’d better choose the activities which interest us and suit us； Schools should organize more activities for students and leave more time for activities by giving us less homework．【提出建議】
  Dear friends，please actively take part in after-activities，which will not only make your school life colorful，but also improve your learning．【發(fā)出號(hào)召，總結(jié)全文】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文寫作時(shí)要抓住要點(diǎn)，緊扣After-class Activities這一主題，把文章中提示的要點(diǎn)以及關(guān)鍵詞用上，注意提建議的句型如：Here I have some suggestions；Why don't you…；Why not…等等，注意句式要富有變化，避免平鋪直敘，可使用一些高級(jí)的語法為文章增色．書寫時(shí)語法要正確，書寫要工整，過渡要自然．