Question

健康一直是人們關(guān)注的問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表信息提示，寫一篇短文。

健康的重要性	保持健康的方法
健康比金錢重要……	健康飲食：多吃水果蔬菜；少吃快餐。	摒棄（get rid of）不良習(xí)慣：要吃早飯；飯前洗手； 早睡早起，不熬夜。	多鍛煉，強(qiáng)身健體。
你的觀點(diǎn)

要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；
2）要點(diǎn)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不得使用真實(shí)人名和校名等；
3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
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Answer 1

Health is the most important thing to people. Some people may think money is very important. But without health, we can’t have a good life. How can we keep healthy? There are many ways can help us. Firstly, we should eat healthy food, such as fruits and vegetables. Fast food is bad for our health, so we can’t eat much of them. Secondly, we need to get rid of some bad habits. Some people don’t have breakfast or don’t wash hands before meal. We must get rid of them. Besides, our bodies need enough sleep, so we can’t stay up late. Thirdly, doing exercises is also good for our health. We can do many sports we like, such as running, climbing, playing basketball and so on. It can make us healthier and stronger. In my opinion, people should also have a positive attitude to life.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，題中給出了寫作的要點(diǎn)和要求。寫作時(shí)，要注意要點(diǎn)的齊全，并將其組織好。句子要完整，表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確，尤其注意主謂的一致性�？蛇m當(dāng)使用學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)的一些復(fù)合句來(lái)表達(dá)，以及一些連詞的使用。
【亮點(diǎn)分析】此文結(jié)構(gòu)完整，要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利。文章使用了Firstly首先, Secondly第二, Thirdly第三,使結(jié)構(gòu)更清晰明了。文中也有很多常用的表達(dá)形式，例如：But without health, we can’t have a good life.但是沒有健康，我們不能很好的生活；Besides, our bodies need enough sleep, so we can’t stay up late.另外，我們的身體也需要足夠的睡眠，所以我們不能熬夜；In my opinion, people should also have a positive attitude to life.在我看來(lái)，人們對(duì)生活也應(yīng)該有個(gè)積極的態(tài)度。