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16．臨近畢業(yè)，學(xué)校在學(xué)習(xí)小組內(nèi)開展了初中階段自評(píng)和組評(píng)活動(dòng)，假設(shè)你是Moonlight小組的組長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示，為你的組員Tommy進(jìn)行綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)，寫一份素質(zhì)報(bào)告．

Name	Tommy （一個(gè)十五歲的初三學(xué)生）
Characteristics	聰明、大方、樂于助人
Hobbies	不僅喜歡看偵探小說而且喜歡看關(guān)于體育新聞的電視節(jié)目．
Study	自從本學(xué)期他把絕大部分精力投放到學(xué)習(xí)中，他取得了很大進(jìn)步．
Honour	他成功地幫助Detective Lu解決了綁架的案子．今年，學(xué)校授予了他見義勇為獎(jiǎng)（Award for Bravery）
Problems	面臨考試，遭受壓力痛苦，他沒有充足的睡眠．
Your suggestions	（根據(jù)實(shí)際情況提一兩點(diǎn)建議）…

要求：1、表達(dá)清楚、語(yǔ)法正確、上下文連貫；
2、要點(diǎn)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)班級(jí)、姓名等；
3、詞數(shù)：100詞左右．
Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight．                                  ．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】He is ①not only ②fond of reading detective stories but also likes TV programs about sports news他不僅喜歡看偵探小說而且喜歡看關(guān)于體育新聞的電視節(jié)目．①not only…but also…不僅…而且…．連接兩個(gè)對(duì)等成分．②be fond of喜歡…
【高分句型二】Second，①it's better for him to manage his time wisely ①so that he can have enough time to rest．第二，他最好合理的安排時(shí)間，那樣就有足夠的時(shí)間睡眠．①it's+adj+for sb to do sth對(duì)某人來說做某事是怎樣的．it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語(yǔ)．②so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight．He is a 15-year-old student in Grade Nine．He has many strong qualities，such as being clever，generous，and helpful．（聰明、大方、樂于助人）He is not only fond of reading detective stories but also likes TV programs about sports news．【高分句型一】（不僅喜歡看偵探小說而且喜歡看關(guān)于體育新聞的電視節(jié)目．）Since this term，he has devoted most of his effort to studying．As a result，he has made great progress（自從本學(xué)期他把絕大部分精力投放到學(xué)習(xí)中，他取得了很大進(jìn)步）Besides，he succeeded in helping Detective Lu solve a kidnapping case．Our school presented him with Award for Bravery this year．（他成功地幫助Detective Lu解決了綁架的案子．今年，學(xué)校授予了他見義勇為獎(jiǎng)）
However，Tommy is also facing some problems of our age．For one thing，he suffers from stress whenever the exam is coming．For another （thing），he doesn't have enough sleep．（面臨考試，遭受壓力痛苦，他沒有充足的睡眠．）
As for his problems，I'd like to offer him some advice．First，he should go over what he has learned before exams．Second，it's better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest．【高分句型二】（建議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫作時(shí)要注意遣詞造句，不能受漢語(yǔ)的影響，要用地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，注意時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，單詞拼寫，語(yǔ)法等問題，用好簡(jiǎn)單句，適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句．可以用一些高級(jí)詞匯．還要注意句子的關(guān)聯(lián)．另外這篇文章還有要求寫出自己的感受，這是開放的部分，要學(xué)生自己展開想象，組織語(yǔ)言，給出理由．