Question

【題目】學校將舉辦英語寫作比賽，請根據所給提示，以“My life in 20 years”為題，寫一篇短文，分享你對未來的憧憬。

注意事項：

1．詞數: 100詞左右(文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數)；

2．文中不能出現真實姓名、校名等信息；

3．文章必須包含所提供的主要信息，并作適當發(fā)揮。

My life in 20 years

I’m always working hard for a bright future I imagine

Answer 1

【答案】My life in 20 years

I’m always working hard for a bright future I imagine.

In the past school life, I have learnt a lot of knowledge and made many friends. My past life in school have much fun, and now I want to talk about something about my future.

In the present I study hard to get collage. After collage life I will face more new challenges, for example, the first is I need to get a job and work hard to make money. I want to be a teacher when I grow up because I want to impart my knowledge to the new generation.

Second, I need to make money to support my parents because they have given me so much when I was young. What’s more, I will take good care of them to express my thanks

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇材料作文，提示內容就是本文的寫作要點。這些要點構成寫作的基本框架。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是用一般現在時態(tài)和一般將來時來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。